I am from parents
two loving, supportive parents
two fun-loving older sisters
one playful, large golden retriever
I am from a cozy home
from the large oak tree in the yard
I am from the clean,
laundry smelling home
I am from the chaos
from the bonding moments
I am from movie nights
from Sunday family dinners
I am from parents
two caring, compassionate parents
two amazing older sisters
one joyful, loving golden retriever
It sounds like our home life is very similar.
ReplyDeleteSame except my dog was a miniature dog
ReplyDeleteNice little flow to it. Sounds very comfortoming. Home is where it's at. I love my parents.
ReplyDeleteTanner, This poem just totally sounded comforting and flowed so easily. Thanks for sharing!
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ReplyDeleteI can't explain how much I love this! Any post that someone writes about their dog, I will love even more haha. I think this poem is very creative, and we get to see "where your from". Its funny how just a short poem can tell a person so much! I can tell you love your sisters, and your parents. I know you have a golden retriever you obviously miss, or you wouldn't be writing about him. I can also tell you grew up in a nice house, with a big tree in your yard, and probably a nice neighborhood! I loved reading this!!
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Tanner, I really enjoyed reading your poem. I also did a blog post on this mentor text and it's fun getting to read another persons poem. Your poem really gave me a feel of what your life is like and where you are from. I also liked how you used subtle repetitions thought out the poem. Really well done !
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ReplyDeleteAt first glance I didn't know what this was going to tell me, but it told me quite a bit about enough. All the important things in your life you hold dear. Great way to tell us where your from.
I loved that you tried the where I'm from poem! It taught me a little more about where you're from, and it also gives us all a better insight to how you grew up!
ReplyDeleteI love this post that talks about where you are from. It reminds me of my home and where I am from. I also have to amazing parents and two siblings.
ReplyDeleteI like how I can imagine what you are talking about family and home. I want to think about how I grew up.
ReplyDeleteI love your poem and how it describes where you're from. I like how while I was reading the poem, I can imagine how your yard looks.
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